I own one cat. No two, no three!
and they are as cute as cats can be.
I have a black cat sporting some white,
he's dressed in a tux, going out at night.
My next cat is the color yellow,
She's really shy, and nice and mellow.
My third cat is a mix of colors,
she's everything, unlike the others.
I love my cats, they're so nice to me,
and they are as cute, as cats can be!
It's a little...flaky. No offense. Put some thought into it.
ReplyDeleteYeah, well, I know it's not that good. I just wanted something to post. I knew u were going to criticize it and i wanted to tell u a good way to do it. First of all, if u r going to criticize someone's poetry, try complementing first, then you lay on the criticism and then u suggest a few things that might make it better. That way it makes the person happy, and they feel like their poem could be improved. If u want me to change it, tell me what u like and what i could do to change it. It's as simple as that. Of course the help might be bad and you could choose not to use it or u could alter it.
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DeleteJust be nice, make ur critisizem, them tell the person how to change their poetry.
ReplyDeleteOk. no need to be so strict about it.
ReplyDeletejust saying, It's a good way to do it
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