Saturday, June 2, 2012
The Colors of The Sky By Maddy
I asked myself why the sky is blue.
I asked my mother and father, too.
But when I talked about the sky
They couldn't find a good reply.
I looked outside one rainy day
And said, "Why is the sky so grey?"
I asked Amanda, but had no luck.
Might as well have asked a duck.
One evening I watched the sunset overhead
And wondered, "Why's the sky so red?"
This time I asked the Internet.
But it was no smarter than my tv set.
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That is an awesome unfinished poem!
ReplyDeleteAny ideas for the last line?
DeleteYeah. I just put the last line on the poem. It was the best I could come up with.
ReplyDeleteThe point is that at the end, the Internet tells the answer. So your ending kind of doesn't work.
ReplyDeleteWell you could have told me that! And is that the point? That electronics are smarter than humans? I don't think so.
ReplyDeleteJust shut UP already! i can't believe u can be a chatterbox on a BLOG!!!!!!!!
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